the long walk

Subject: the long walk Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:52 pm

*jane walked out of her room and started down a long hall and then out into the desert*

Subject: Re: the long walk Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:13 pm

*"i wounder if grimble will follow" jane thought*

Subject: Re: the long walk Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:31 pm

Grimble was folowing her from far behind so that she wouldn't know that he was there. He wouldn't ever let anything happen to her. But hr thought that maybe she needed some alone time.

Subject: Re: the long walk Fri Jul 04, 2008 10:39 pm

jane walked feeling alone then saw a desert rabbit she smiled

Subject: Re: the long walk Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:10 pm

"hello mr.rabbit!" she said "lovely day isnt it?" she said goofing off

"yes isnt if miss.eyre(air)" the rabbit said

jane looked at the rabbit in surprise

"yes i can talk! now shut your mouth its not a lovely sight to see someone gapping at you" he snapped

"wow talking rabbit!" jane exclaimed

"we've figured that out already" the rabbit said

"well mr.rabbit, you know my name but im afriad i dont know yours" jane said

"yes you do its mr.reed" mr.reed said

"uncle!" jane said

"yes looks like my dying wish didnt come through" he observed

"no it hast" jane admitted

"yes as i can see you've been through lot so i desided to come back to earth as a rabbit to watch over you" mr.reed said

"god let you?" jane asked

"yes he did" mr.reed said

they walk off farther and farther and farther away from the house and the lil' grimble

Subject: Re: the long walk Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:10 pm

oh wow thats alot

Subject: Re: the long walk Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:00 am

"Well if she would ather be with him then I'm leaving!!" then he ran off into the desert.

Subject: Re: the long walk Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:01 am

jane went back the her house "grimble? grimble where are you?" she yelled

she looked for 4 whole days and when she couldn't find him she began to hardly eat and saleep and if he didn't back she'd comptly stop eating

Subject: Re: the long walk Sat Jul 05, 2008 3:37 pm

Your not Jane. Suspect

Subject: Re: the long walk Sun Jul 06, 2008 12:15 am

im going to leave nowembassed i know we swiched last night and forgot to log me out.............. Embarassed

Subject: Re: the long walk Sun Jul 06, 2008 12:16 am

and my bad sorry

Subject: Re: the long walk Sun Jul 06, 2008 12:16 am

goodbye for a long long time until i get over this

Subject: Re: the long walk Sun Jul 06, 2008 12:19 am

shiz not the real word this is my fault im embassed too

Subject: Re: the long walk Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:41 am

Don't be embassed! I forget to log my brother out all of the time! It's nothing to get worked up about.

Subject: Re: the long walk Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:03 pm

dry sarcamlim no there is nothin to get worked up bout well I will type for now on in dryly enthauameim

Subject: Re: the long walk Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:36 pm

Grimble was only a few yards away from the mantion but he wasn't going to let Jane know it. *How could she just go and leave me for a rabbit?! I'm her pet, ME!*

Subject: Re: the long walk Mon Jul 07, 2008 9:03 pm

mr.reed thanks for coming back jane said but now grimbles gone
oh im soory mr.reed repiled

Subject: Re: the long walk Tue Jul 08, 2008 2:11 am

jane saw something move grimble sh called

Subject: Re: the long walk Tue Jul 08, 2008 4:51 am

Grimble herd Jane coming toward his hiding place. He jumped out and growled at her. Then he atacted the ribbit, ripping off the end of it's ear. Then he said, "I was suppoused to be yours! But you choose him over me!" then he ran off again.

Subject: Re: the long walk Tue Jul 08, 2008 12:15 pm

*grimble uncle reed grimble* she thought "come on uncle reed we;re chasing my ratcoon down unless he don't want to come back" jane said

Subject: Re: the long walk Tue Jul 08, 2008 10:02 pm

jane sat down in the middle of the desert all alone with only a rabbit so she started to cry then three days in the heat and her starving stumache she fainted knocked out cold

Subject: Re: the long walk Wed Jul 09, 2008 1:58 pm

Grimble had decided to comeback and check on Jane. As he was going though the desert he saw her laying on the ground. She was breathing but not very well. He looked at the rabbit and said, "You, bunny, go to the hotel and get help. NOW!"

Subject: Re: the long walk Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:57 pm

the rabbit didnt want to but he went and got help

Subject: Re: the long walk Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:01 am

With the help of the person that the bunny had brought they managed to get Jane back to the hotel. They got her up to the room then Grimble thanked their help. "Bunny thanks for geting help now you can go." then he turned to Jand nd dripped water into her mouth hoping that she would come awake.

Subject: Re: the long walk Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:08 pm

jan ewoke up what happened she asked

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